Lauren! Great job on your presentation. Also, you're very quiet in class and you spoke very loud and very clearly. I'm sorry about your dad. You're a very strong person. Great job on your presentation!
Lauren, you had a really good presentation. Relating all these readings to something so personal is hard but you did great. Good eye contact and you spoke clear. Good job! =]
Lauren, you had a great presentation! You related each text and project to yourself soo... well! Making those personal connections must have been hard. AWESOME JOB!
Lauren, Good job , Its hard talking about personal things and i can connect becuase i used to live in a area near a place that sounds like that. Great job.
Lauren, you did a great job on your presentation. I thought you made great personal connections on what you talked about. It was very emotional but really descriptive. Great job!
Lauren, you did a great job on speaking just so passionately and we could all tell you put a lot of thought and feeling into this project. You also made good eye contact and spoke loudly and clearly. Terrific Job!
lauren, you had amazing personal connections. You sound like you have a very hard life but just to let you know people in this classroom are here for you including me. You looked at your audience good job
Lauren, you did a great job explaining each subject and related them to yourself. I know it was hard sharing those little personal things, and I thought that you were very courageous to do that. You did great!
Great job Lauren, I thought it was really great how you could make such an emotional connection. Your slide show was good, but next time, you need to time it better because it was over before you were done talking. Great job overall!
Lauren, Wow, you had a great presentation and it was nice to hear those personal stories. They really made your presentation more interesting. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that. But you did a really good job.
Lauren, you did a really good job on your final presentation. Relating to yourself was really good because you chose something that really did matter to you.
Lauren, You did a really great job on your presentation. I thought it was really great that you shared such personal connections, and I appreciated that you were willing to be so open with us. I can't imagine wat it would be like to share such personal things, and you were very brave to tell everything you did. You made great points and wonderful connections. Awesome job!
You did a very good job at making eye contact. You did a very good job at relating things to yourself. I am so sorry that you have gone through so much and I really hope that things have gotten better for you and I hope that it is much better for you here. You did a good job and relating them to the world also. Great job!
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you did a good job making personal connections very good job you made good points good powerpoint to
Lauren! Great job on your presentation. Also, you're very quiet in class and you spoke very loud and very clearly. I'm sorry about your dad. You're a very strong person. Great job on your presentation!
Lauren, you had a really good presentation. Relating all these readings to something so personal is hard but you did great. Good eye contact and you spoke clear. Good job! =]
You had a really good presentation and you made some really good connections. Try not to say "like" as much.
Lauren, you had a great presentation! You related each text and project to yourself soo... well! Making those personal connections must have been hard. AWESOME JOB!
Lauren, Good job , Its hard talking about personal things and i can connect becuase i used to live in a area near a place that sounds like that. Great job.
Lauren, you did a great job on your presentation. I thought you made great personal connections on what you talked about. It was very emotional but really descriptive. Great job!
Lauren, you did a great job on speaking just so passionately and we could all tell you put a lot of thought and feeling into this project. You also made good eye contact and spoke loudly and clearly. Terrific Job!
lauren, you had amazing personal connections. You sound like you have a very hard life but just to let you know people in this classroom are here for you including me. You looked at your audience good job
Lauren, you did a great job explaining each subject and related them to yourself. I know it was hard sharing those little personal things, and I thought that you were very courageous to do that. You did great!
Great job Lauren, I thought it was really great how you could make such an emotional connection. Your slide show was good, but next time, you need to time it better because it was over before you were done talking. Great job overall!
Lauren, you did an amazing job! You had great personal connections!!!!!! You spoke at a steady pace and were very prepared! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!
Lauren,
Wow, you had a great presentation and it was nice to hear those personal stories. They really made your presentation more interesting. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that. But you did a really good job.
Lauren, you did a really good job on your final presentation. Relating to yourself was really good because you chose something that really did matter to you.
Lauren, great presentation. You made great personal connections and you spoke clearly. Great job!
Lauren,
You did a great job and had great connections to yourself. So you also made great eye contact and had good information. So great job.
Lauren,
You did a really great job on your presentation. I thought it was really great that you shared such personal connections, and I appreciated that you were willing to be so open with us. I can't imagine wat it would be like to share such personal things, and you were very brave to tell everything you did. You made great points and wonderful connections. Awesome job!
You did a very good job at making eye contact. You did a very good job at relating things to yourself. I am so sorry that you have gone through so much and I really hope that things have gotten better for you and I hope that it is much better for you here. You did a good job and relating them to the world also. Great job!
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